Rough Cut One

Rough cut One

Rough Cut One

In this first rough cut, we managed to do edit one minute fifteen second, because of location difficulties we did not follow the storybard as such however we made it more creative and safer for Emily. Some of the shots where rather shaky however as a group Jamie and I figured the shaky shots could be metaphorically symbolic of Emily's emotion.  In terms of continuity, i think the clip does flow quite well and there are no major errors. Some shots do appear a little but blurry but again it does make it look rather unique and again represents emotion.

Some parts; Emily does come in a little late in which we will sort and make look perfect. i especially like the part where she is in the garden reaching out of a photo frame , i think it looks creative.

Overall the filming that took place and the editing that was done shows what we wanted to portray and we are quite happy with that, we aim for our next rough cut to be better in terms of editing skills, also maybe include some different lighting techniques to make it look professional and varied.